I guess the only answer I can give you to that question is that I have never seen a pond where that proposed food chain failed. Have you?
I think the assumption of carrying capacity may be high and that they may not achieve the 18" the scenario proposed. In other words, I think maybe the stocking rate of HSB is too high. The OP has two ponds. Maybe he would like to stock a food chain proposed by you and one by me and then report back in 3,4,5,6,etc years?