OK, time for the next round...
I'm sticking with the monitor roof design...until further notice. I took off the deck. The second level was narrowed by 1 ft and the ground level was widened by 2 ft (from 28' - 30'). I'm trying to capture the proportions of the sample structure, below.

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This is what I got

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C'mon ya'll. I'm havin' a Cecil moment here. I see plenty of views, but limited feedback and opinion.